Okay, I really need critique on this ASAP.
i wrote it for my friend whose grandmother just died.
My grandmother died about 2 years ago and it was a really hard time for me and my family , and what got me the most was that after that first week, everyone seemed to have forgotten... anyway, before i go off on a rant, this is for her, and it sorta started morphing into advice to myself if i could send a letter back to then.
anyway, i am really bad at bringing stuff like these things up and i also need opinions. because i don't want to have like an awkward moment either.
yes, i know everybody grieves differently, but like i said, this is for my friend, and my self. a way to let emotions out and give advice.
thanks for reading